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Elvis By The Presleys is the most revealing and poignant video portrait we will ever see of the artist as a husband, father and friend. As never before, Priscilla Presley and Lisa Marie Presley, along with members of Elvis' family and extended family, freely share their own stories, emotions, and intimate memories on camera, and they allow us to enjoy home-movie footage of Elvis never before shared with his fans.
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