Week 27-Kindergarten

Original Paragraph:

For many children and parents, the beginning of kindergarten is a time of great expectations and great hopes-and a little anxiety. Even families in which children have attended day care or preschool percieve kindergarten as the beginning of something different-as the big first step on a path that, if navigated successfully, can lead to a lifetime of learning.

Now I am going to do an imitation of this paragraph:

For many high schoolers, college is their plan and the next big step in their life. They expect it to be very differnt and it most likely will be. Even kids who have attended college prep schools expect it to be different. All they can do now is prepare and hope for the best.