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Join Flo as she returns from Nirvana to help four fellow restaurant owners defeat the greedt tycoon, Mr. Big. You can seat customers, take orders, serve drinks, deliver food, and collect tips. Expert scores earn you more decor upgrades for your restaurant. There are new quirky characters, challenges, and powerups in this version. A surprise restaurant awaits you in this sequel to the original smach hit.
Now I am going to do an evaluation of this paragraph:
This paragraph makes me want to play this game alot! But I think that the weak thing about this paragraph is that no one knows what Nirvana is. But, otherwise, this paragraph is very inviting.
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