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A long time ago, the craft of weaving began with the dawn of civilization. The hand loom. or frame upon which cloth is woven, was one of the man's earliest tools. Four thousand years ago, when Egypt became and fabulous and cultured nation, beautiful cloth was already common.
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This is a very short paragraph, but it is also very informative. It has some dates and history in it also. This is a very nice paragraph.
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