Week 25-Obedience

Original paragraph:

Obedience is very important. The dictionary says that obedience means doing what one is told (World Book). In almost every job, a level of obedience is required. In the home, children need to obey their parents. Many books tell of bad consequences for those who don't obey. For example, almost everyone had heard of the need to obey the Ten Commandments. These rules help us all treat one abother better. If we don't obey them, bad things can happen to us, like: being grounded, being punished, other people being mad at us, being put in jail, and worse. Clearly, obedience is very important in order to avoid bad things.

Now I am going to do an Imitation of this paragraph:

Dependability is very important. The definition of dependability, in my words, is being there wen someone needs you and staying there. People need to be dependable so that people can trust them with a specific job. If you aren't dependable, your parents won't trust you, and people at your work won't get you any jobs to do. People need to be dependable in order to go on good in life.