Week 25-Descriptive

Original Paragraph:

The scenery snowboarding down Mount Hood is spectacular. On both sides of the downhill slope are lush, green, snow-covered, pine trees. When the wind blows, the trees sway back and forth, making a light swishing sound. The snow, which glistens in the sunlight like glitter, is soft, clean, and white. Because if the temperature and snow, the air is invigoratingly damp and chilly. When snowboarding down the mountain, the chilly wind beating against one's face gives a considerable chill. One also hears a slight, crackling noise from the snowboard gliding over the snow. The scenic, winter landscape on Mount Hood draws many to experience it.

Now I am going to do an imitation of this paragraph:

Playing the piano is a very beautiful feeling. When your fingers touch the keys of a piano you feel like you are floating on air. When I play the piano I feel like i'm in an empty white room where there is only the sound of my fingers. It gives you the feeling that you can do anything. Especially when you play a really hard song with ease. Piano playing is a wonderful experience that everyone should enjoy.