Week 25-Gooey Putty

Original Paragraph:

For Ashley and Olivia, creating gooey putty, for play, is an easy process. First, Ashley gathers the needed ingredients: 1 cup of white glue and 1 cup of liquid starch. She also retrieves a two-quart bowl in which to mix the putty. Olivia finds two aprons to protect their clothing and a spatula for mixing. Into the bowl, Olivia pours the white glue. Ashley begins to slowly add the liquid starch while Olivia stirs the mixture. Ashley stops pouring when the concoction becomes the consistency of putty. The girls soon begin to knead the putty with their hands to ensure a complete mixture. If the putty becomes too sticky, the add a little cornstarch. If it is not elastic enough, they add more glue. With the putty done, it is tme for the play to begin. The girls spend the next half-hour squeezing the putty through their fingers and playing with the gooey mixture. Being such a simple process, they often create great enjoyment for themselves.

Now I am going to do an Imitation of this paragraph:

For Megan and Katie, making pizza is a very easy task. First, get some dough and roll it out into the shape of a pizza (how big you want it, etc...). Then open a can of pizza sauce and slather it all over it (except on the back of course). Next put a layer of your choice of meat on the pizza. After that, put a thick layer of cheese on top of the meat. Then, for the finishing touch, put some olives on it, or any type of garnish you would like. Now you have your pizza!! Just put it in the oven, cook, and enjoy!!