My Room

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Towering trees surround the sides of my tree fort. Forest sounds sing me to sleep when I stay the night in my favorite place. Occasionally, when the moon is out, I hear the movement of animals in the brush. In a flash I'm awake and sitting up. When the noise ceases, I can sleep again. The only time I can't go back to sleep is when the coyotes laugh at me from the hills behind our property. Laughing coyotes can make any kid's mind play tricks.
-anonymous

Now I am going to write an imitation of this paragraph:

Posters of pirates and funny sayings cut from magazies cover the wall of my crowded room. Billy Joel or Guns N' Roses lull me to sleep when I hunker down for the night. Once in awhile, I'll look out my bedroom window and see the clear skies with beautiful stars peeping out to see me. I force the covers off and kneel by my window to get a closer look. After I get cold enough, I pull on my Aspen Colorado sweatshirt and rub my arms violently. I finally crawl back into bed after I have gotten a good enough look and drift off to sleep.