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Anne Shirley is a character in a book entitled Anne of Green Gables. Anne possesses an unbelievable imagination. She is always dreaming of herself as being royalty. She is an orphan, so she imagines having a family. Anne is also stubborn and willful. She struggles with accepting her apearance. Her red hair and freckles bother her and she wishes for a more glamorous appearance. Anne's flair for the dramatic gets her into positive and negative situations. Sometimes her dramatics lead to others thinking she is in crisis. Anne also has opportunity to deliver dramtic poetry. Finally, Anne is a loyal and loving person. She is loyal and appreciative of Marilla and Matthew who have taken her into their home. Anne is a fun girl whom many readers have come to love.
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Pocahontas is a character in the Disney movie "Pocahontas." She is a native American who trusts her native spirits with her future. She loves to imagine things and has a dificulty in her life. Her father wants her to marry a certain native American but she doesn't like him. She likes to be free as the wind and loves her pets. She falls in love with an Englishman and he has to leave...but she is still loyal to him even though he is gone. Pocahontas is very wonderful story that most people will enjoy.
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