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Towering trees surround the sides of my tree fort. Forest sounds sing me to sleep when I stay the night in my favorite place. Occasionally, when the moon is out, I hear the movement of animals in the brush. In a flash I'm awake and sitting up. When the noise ceases, I can sleep again. The only time I can't go back to sleep is when the coyotes laugh at me from the hills behind our property. Laughing coyotes can make any kid's mind play tricks.

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Hundreds of snakes closing in on me. Snakes are my worst fear, besides heights. They are my worst nightmare, and the most prominent one I have. They remind me of the devil; every time I see one that is what I think of. I always wake up sweating in the middle of the night after dreaming of numerous snakes.