Original Paragraph:
"Quick! The limo!" Nancy cried out. She, Frank, Joe, and bess al raced to Jean-Claude's limousine. Nancy galnced down Fifth Avenue, hoping to see the van tied up in traffic. But as she looked, the van swerved to theright, leaped onto the curb, and plowed down the sidewalk, scattering pedestrians to either side of it.
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I really like this paragraph because it really draws you into the story and it is very action-packed. Mysteries like these are very fun to me to read. But they are also very predictable. I always know who is the culprit before the book is over.
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