Week 26-Fine Arts

Original paragraph:

A child needs to observe and make art in order to understand and appreciate the arts. A book alone cannot adequately convey the experience of music or the impact of visual art. This book can hope to provide basic knowledge about art, but parents, teachers, and children themselves must play the main role. Nothing can replace visiting galleries, attending performances, listening to recordings, and encouraging children to sing, paint, sculpt, and playact for themselves.

Now I am going to do an imitation of this paragraph:

A highschooler needs to observe and apply their own abilities to writing. Eventually, even those that don't really like to write will like it once they put their own talents or "flavor" into their work. But before they can do this, they must know how to put together sentences, paragraphs, and essays, otherwise, they will get frustrated while trying to put their own reflections onto paper. In conclusion, parents/teachers need to encourage their highschooler to read other people's works and try to do their own as much as possible.