Original Paragraph:
"On December 7, 1941, the uneasy peace is shattered as the Japanese carrier fleet launches a surprise attack on Pearl Harbor and the island of Oahu. Within thirty minutes, the power of the United States Pacific Fleet is devastated. By the end of the attack, seven battleships are damaged or sunk, half the aircraft on the island are wiped out and 2,400 American lives are lost."
I am now going to do a continuation of this paragraph (Mine is going to be made up):
Now even though all of these lives are lost, there is still hope for the Americans, General Shamrock is here to save the day. He has a lot of money and is going to restore all of the damages done and is going to buy all new planes and aircraft carriers. He is even going to send over a large fleet of soldiers from his native land, Ireland. They are all willing to help in the fight and are glad to share food and shelter with the wounded soldiers. The fight is now going to turn out wonderfully if only General Shamrock's men can fight it out.
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